โจ Animating your Narrative
๐ Make your stories unforgettable by adding action, dialogue, emotion, and immersive detail. These quick exercises breathe life into narratives! ๐ญ๐๏ธ๐
Try and find some paragraphs which use some of these tips and tricks!
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๐ฅ Start with a bangโa chase, crash, or argument.
๐ Expand into a scene with zero backstory. Just action.
๐ค Reflect: what did readers learn without being told?
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๐คผโโ๏ธ Write an argument between two characters using only dialogue.
๐ฅ Remove speech tagsโcan someone guess who said what?
๐งโโ๏ธ Add body language or stage directions to deepen the scene.
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๐ Describe a setting (e.g., market, kitchen, forest) without naming itโuse only the senses.
๐ป Write a horror scene with just sound and touch.
๐ญ Swap with a friendโcan they guess the place? ๐ Now Novel - Writing with the Five Senses
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๐ฌ Start with a tiny detail (a crack, a sound, a petal).
๐ Expand to reveal the world or problem around it.
๐ Reverse itโstart broad, end on a striking detail.
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๐ฌ Turn "She was scared" into actions (e.g., pacing, clenched fists).
๐ช๏ธ Use metaphors to capture emotions.
๐ค Share with a friendโdid they feel the emotion?
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๐คฏ Write a character's thoughts that contradict what they do.
๐ค Add an external pressure forcing them to act differently.
๐ฅ Rewrite from another characterโs internal POV.
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๐ค Start with a clichรฉ lineโtwist it unexpectedly.
โก End with a shocking sentence that flips everything.
๐ Rewrite it knowing the twistโwhat changes?
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๐ซ Start with a strange package. Whatโs inside?
๐ Characters argue over what to do with it.
๐ต๏ธโโ๏ธ The object reveals a secret or past trauma.
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๐ก Choose one emotion and list five explosive verbs.
๐ ๏ธ Build a scene where every action reflects that emotion.
๐ Halfway, flip the emotionโhow does it change the story?
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๐๏ธ Write a moment from one POV.
๐ญ Rewrite from anotherโs, revealing something new.
๐คท Add a third voice who totally misreads the situation. ๐ MasterClass - Narrative Perspective